"Edge" works ... wondering if "Life on the" is your best bit of creative writing? Does it say something unique about sports and music?
You have turned your aversion to twitter into a personal brand attribute within the class. That is effective, in terms of taking a position that attracts attention. Now seek out a similar position (it may have nothing to do with twitter) that has the same kind effect in a broader context.
Humour can be very effective. Why am I not laughing right now? (my point is, to relate you personal brand maybe you should come at this with more comedy?)
good objectives
I would expect your key messages to be more focused. Unique.
"Edge" works ... wondering if "Life on the" is your best bit of creative writing? Does it say something unique about sports and music?
ReplyDeleteYou have turned your aversion to twitter into a personal brand attribute within the class. That is effective, in terms of taking a position that attracts attention. Now seek out a similar position (it may have nothing to do with twitter) that has the same kind effect in a broader context.
Humour can be very effective. Why am I not laughing right now? (my point is, to relate you personal brand maybe you should come at this with more comedy?)
good objectives
I would expect your key messages to be more focused. Unique.
good work!